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The Review

Plan, create, edit and publish written and multimodal texts, organising and expanding ideas, and selecting text structures, language features, literary devices and visual features for purposes and audiences.

A review is a judgement backed by evidence. Summarising the plot is the trap — a review that only retells is not a review.

Method

Judgement, not summary
No more than a quarter of a review should describe what happens. The rest is evaluation.
No spoilers
Never give away the ending. A review helps someone decide whether to go.
Every opinion needs an example
‘The acting was excellent’ earns nothing. Name the actor and the scene.

Worked example

e.g. Write a review of a film, book or performance for the school magazine.
  1. A headline that carries an opinion, not just a title.A small film that earns its big ending
  2. A by-line — your name.by Aisha Nkomo
  3. Opening — name the work, the maker and the type, and hint at your verdict.The Long Way Round, directed by Kim Lee, is a quiet road film that takes its time.
  4. A short outline. Enough to follow, and no ending.Two estranged brothers drive from Cairns to Perth to sell their late father's car.
  5. What worked — with a specific example.The scene at the roadhouse is played almost without dialogue, and is the strongest in the film.
  6. What did not work — with a specific example. A review with no criticism is an advertisement.The middle hour repeats itself, and the soundtrack often tells you what to feel.
  7. The verdict, and who it is for.Worth seeing if you like slow, character-led stories. Impatient viewers should skip it.

Practice

Turn each empty judgement into one that could score.

1
‘The acting was really good.’ Rewrite it so it earns a mark.
AnswerPriya Raman plays the older brother almost entirely through silence; in the roadhouse scene she conveys forty years of resentment without speaking a line.
2
A learner's review spends two-thirds of the word count retelling the plot. What has gone wrong?
AnswerThey have written a summary. A review is judged on evaluation, so most of those words earn nothing. Cut the plot to two or three sentences.
3
Why must a review include something negative?
AnswerBecause a judgement with no weighing is not a judgement. Naming a weakness shows you have measured the work rather than simply enjoyed it.
4
Who is a review written for, and how does that change the ending?
AnswerFor someone deciding whether to read, watch or attend. So the last line should say who would like it — not just whether you did.
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